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gravity_defier
this is my first time using a lot of these effects in my current banner/icon set (if you've noticed, my banners are usually pretty dull looking cuz i wasn't brave enough to try all these fancy effects! :roll: :disagree: :mrgreen: )
Wiz O' Oz
You banner looks amazing just those snapshot things make it look cheapy.
gravity_defier
(Wiz O' Oz)
You banner looks amazing just those snapshot things make it look cheapy.


i was kinda thinking that too...especially for the snapshot thingy on the left...
Galindaispopular
anything i can improve on my banner i finally found out how to blend it gimp
bobert5353
Your banner is way too black. Make sure your background color is transparent.
Elphaba=idinashoshanaeden
What should I do to improve my banner and avatar?
WizardandI
I'd say just lighten it up a bit...It's a little dark
Galindaispopular
(bobert5353)
Your banner is way too black. Make sure your background color is transparent.


the thing with gimp if you make the background transperent this happens

EDIT: wrong image


unless you meant something else
TheatreSam
(gravity_defier)
this is my first time using a lot of these effects in my current banner/icon set (if you've noticed, my banners are usually pretty dull looking cuz i wasn't brave enough to try all these fancy effects! :roll: :disagree: :mrgreen: )

I absolutley love your banner. Very pleasing to the eye. The only contradiction I have is the green snapshot. It seems out of place. Maybe B&W rather than green? Idk.
gravity_defier
(TheatreSam)
The only contradiction I have is the green snapshot. It seems out of place. Maybe B&W rather than green? Idk.


i did actually have it as black and white...it kinda looked out of place as well. maybe i'll change it back..
Boqboy122
Wut CC you got about my current banner and icon?
Miss Glinda
Maybe lighten your icon a bit. I feel like the text is overpowering the picture, and the text should be there to compliment the picture.

As for your banner - I like it. Nice and simple.
Nick Chopper
Boqboy - I agree with Miss Glinda on your avatar. I also agree that the simplicity of your banner makes it stand out as unique, and it doesn't have a "splash everything on for the hell of it" feel. It's nice. The only suggestion I could make is that you have a little too much white space. Perhaps push the pictures closer to the middle - just a little bit.
daisy
http://community.livejournal.com/flying_ad...970.html#cutid1

Any criticism on my latest post/any icon posts?
Nick Chopper
Daisy - I really like your banners. Whether it was the cool or warm tones, you make them feel deep, instead of flat. While I like the torn-page effect on the first banner, I'm not so certain the text on the second one matches the colours of the banner. That's just a nitpick. As for your icons, the colour ones stood out to me more, and I'm a sucker for black/white. Sometimes it seems as though there's either too much black space, or the brush/text become the focus instead of the image. I'm also a believer in not using a colour in an icon that doesn't exist in the image (save for white, but that's tricky).
bobert5353
Anything on my current banner?
DelusionsOfGrandeur
The coloring is kind of glowing and red, especially on the photo of Lea drinking coffee. She's pretty red in that one, and her hands are kind of splotch-y. I'd say just watch how many overlay/soft light layers or selective colors you're using.

I love the light texture, though. Very pretty!
bobert5353
I fixed it up a bit. It came out a lot better. Lea is kinda blue now lol, I can keep messing around with some stuff.
DelusionsOfGrandeur
Yeah, she is kind of blue. But, it looks 100000x better already! I always go crazy with layers, also. :mrgreen:
Galindaispopular
i was talking to a little perky adn she gave me some tips to help me redo my banner does the blending look nicer i relize it looks somewhat black but thats the background colour of all the pics i used
daisy
Thanks, Nick. I'll keep it in mind next time. I guess sometimes I like to crop things out of the norm and a bit abstract, which is where there's alot of space. I'll take your ideas in mind, though.
India
any ideas on how i could improve my current banner/av?
DelusionsOfGrandeur
I think the coloring on your banner is really pretty, but there's alot of white space between the second and third pictures. Maybe try putting the pictures closer together.
ShizKid
Can I have some CC on my current wallpaper, and a banner I made?



oh so mar
I like the wallpaper, but the text seems a little misplaced.
ShizKid
(oh so mar)
I like the wallpaper, but the text seems a little misplaced.


Yeah, I had trouble with that. I wanted it to be a straight diagonal line, but the spacing wouldnt work, so i settled for that. :ha:
_Andreww_
I know I've had this banner for a while.. but I was wondering what everyone thought of it?
XxDavidAyersxX
any C&C on my current banner??
ItsMeeee
(_Andreww_)
I know I've had this banner for a while.. but I was wondering what everyone thought of it?


I like your banner because its simple, however soooooo many people have that picture of Julia now either in their avatar or banner!

Any CC about my avatar ( i am changing my banner soon but i welcome any CC on that too)
WizardandI
I made a bunch of different versions of the same icon and I was wondering which one people liked best and if anyone had any constructive criticism





ShizKid
(WizardandI)
I made a bunch of different versions of the same icon and I was wondering which one people liked best and if anyone had any constructive criticism


I <33 the coloring on this one!
bobert5353
Anything on this?

oh so mar
Bob, whatever texture you used is messing with the faces and it's way too busy.
2wicked2be4good
(WizardandI)




these two are my favorites because of the coloring, and because how crisp the last one looks.
girl in the mirror
Bob I would change the hue/saturation because its all discolored on their faces. Also I would add a soft light later of the base to make it smoother and look better.

And xxDavidAyersxx I LOVE your banner, I love how you placed the pics!
bobert5353



I decided to use heavy selective coloring instead. Any comments? I have hated all of my grapahics lately so I am looking for new things to try and new techniques and such.
ShizKid


CC? I tried using only one picture, and with the white backround, none of the textures i wanted to use looked good, so i added the diagonal lines and the pink circles.
girl in the mirror
Bob the coloring looks really good. I would add maybe a light exclusion layer though so it's not so fluorescent.

And where you have the white under the font I would make it a different color and set to screen or something so you can see through it.

other than that it looks great!

Shizkid - did you just lower the opacity of the lines and circles? Or did you set it to overlay or something?
gravity_defier
i made this banner for my sister:

ShizKid
(girl in the mirror)
Bob the coloring looks really good. I would add maybe a light exclusion layer though so it's not so fluorescent.

And where you have the white under the font I would make it a different color and set to screen or something so you can see through it.

other than that it looks great!

Shizkid - did you just lower the opacity of the lines and circles? Or did you set it to overlay or something?


(The names Anthony)

I set the lines to Overlay, and opacity 45% or something. I wanted the lines to be shown a lot, too bring more to the banner.
NannerboBanner
So I made two icons of the same picture:


Which coloring do you think looks better, if either, and what should I fix?
_Andreww_
I like the second one better.. in the first one her hair is a little blue and I think the second one is just smoother.
bobert5353


Thanks for the tips Shan!
gravity_defier
how come half the stuff i post on here is never looked at... :?

i'll try again...

i made this banner for my sister:

RockTheSoul
^ you'res are good. you might want to add in a few more colorful textures to yer work.

and Bob, you're banners are very nice, but you might want to try playing around with some new fonts. Use more than one font on a banner, its adds *flavor* to it.
girl in the mirror
Sorry Anthony, haha. I would maybe erase the part over her face using 50% opacity so you can still see it a little bit, and I would add a border and maybe a few brushes?

Nancy I like the first coloring. Not sure I would fix anything about either!

Sarah that looks great! I would agree with Christy though.
ShizKid
Out of these 2 banners which one do you like the most?



bobert5353
Yeah I agree Christy, thanks for pointing that out. I am just going through a dry spell with graphic making.

Any one else ever feel like that? I'm not happy with like anything I have made lately and I just feel really uninspired and uncreative and I am having a hard time doing stuff.
DanaC
Bob, I've been feeling like that until recently. Try and get into something new! Like, I started getting into Grey's and Skins, and that helped a lot. Music helps, getting into a new artist or musical even. It takes a while, but when you get out of the funk, you'll feel MUCH better about your graphics.

EDIT: I just made a new banner, and I swiched out my avvie. Any CC? smile.gif
Nick Chopper
Usually being away from Adobe each weekday helps inspire me. Sometimes, however, I hit a blank and have a lot of trouble working with the graphics. This is for banners, in particular.

DanaC - In particular, I love the banner. The only nitpick I have is the last image. The first two images are nice and crisp, excellent saturation and resolution. The last one doesn't fit. Also, I don't like how her hair falls into the second image's arm. Perhaps put the second image infront of the third in your layer box. Your avatar is simple - which is good. I like the low hued tones. It helps the yellow stand out.

Shizkid - I'd choose the first banner. For the images in the second banner, they seem too space out. However, I like the text in the second better than the first. In the first, it really dominates, and draws attention away from the images.

gravity_defier - I've noticed a lot of people really like that black/white circle effect that RocktheSoul introduced, but your's doesn't seem crisp enough. My advice - don't feather that part. Or have a glow. Also, all of the images go well together, except that second one. Putting book/cover images with liveaction ones hardly ever goes well. Remove that, and move the first over with the others, and I think that banner is going to look really good. I love the overlays you have on it.

I'd like some criticism before I change my banner:

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